Nampara and the sea
All we know is this moment, and this moment, Ross, we are alive! We are. We are. The past is over, gone. What is to come doesn’t exist yet. That’s tomorrow! It’s only now that can ever be, at any one moment. And at this moment, now, we are alive — and together. We can’t ask more. There isn’t any more to ask — concluding passage spoken by Demelza in Graham’s Angry Tide is divided up, re-paraphrased to be more sentimental and spoken by Ross and Demelza in tandem as concluding passage in 8 but for Ross’s promise to return
Friends and readers,
The ending of the eighth episode of this (last?) fifth season is carefully structured so that its last scenes (and words) are those the eighth Poldark book, The Stranger from the Sea implicitly rehearses at its opening as the remembered ending of the 7th book, The Angry Tide. In case we don’t see this (Debbie Horsfield has to keep in mind the viewership may not have read the first seven books upon which the five seasons of the new Poldark are based), she underlines a projected intent with a (overdone) reiteration by Ross that he promises Demelza he will return. The music surges, his figure is seen walking into the distance rhythmically like some god or force as she watches from the cliff.
Ross’s (Aiden Turner) last words to Demelza (Eleanor Tomlinson): “I swear to you, my love, I will return ….”
In this second half of the season once Despard (Vincent Reagan) is hanged, the love stories that Horsfield has developed out of Graham’s material and her additions take over what subjective space and matter there is and are more or less concluded: Cecily Hanson (Lily Dodsworth-Evans) attempts to elope to Jamaica with Geoffrey Charles (Freddie Wise) and is thwarted by her father. Morwenna (Ellise Chappell) cannot resist stalking the small child John Conan, causes emotional havoc for herself and Drake (Harry Richardson) and almost lands Drake in prison once again, except that the harridan old woman, Lady Whitworth (Rebecca Front) softens, after which we are expected to believe Morwenna goes home cured, ready to have sex with Drake. (What does one thing have to do with another? She was not avoiding sex because she was in love with this child — it was her memories of harrowing sadistic sex that froze her.)
Tess (Sofia Oxenham) functions like the femme fatale of spy thrillers (more on this in the comments) except she is a thug: she heads a band of thieves stealing precious ore from Ross’s mine, she lures Sam (Tom York) turned stupid once again, away from the good pious Rosina (Amelia Clarkson), and has an affair with Ross who himself uses her for his plot to undermine the French conspiracy to invade England.
Side stories suggested briefly: Caroline’s (Gabriella Wilde) maternal instincts are aroused when Mowenna’s baby is born and, like Morwenna with Drake, almost miraculously, she is ready once again to have sex and a child with Dwight (Luke Norris). A much better scene is the one where she thinks of how she can approach someone powerful to protect Dwight from whatever he is doing (he also keeps her in the dark)
Sam and Rosina are a convincing pair until the silly Tess material intervenes and then they given but one scene together — it is effective their making up
Caroline is given gravitas in her dress and behavior in the last parts of the fifth season — mostly during the trial and aftermath
I say what subjective matter there is because in the last two episodes of the season, the script is that of the spy-mystery thriller action-adventure melodrama so typical of serials on most TV channels in the last few years. The trajectory is that Ross (at first to save his own life when he is captured by a French traitor-revolutionary) pretends to join in on a French conspiracy to invade England; he is gathering information so that he can send it to William Wickham, and thus restore the respect he had enjoyed from this man before he became involved with Despard. He hides this motive and this aim from everyone so that he appears to have distanced himself and become another man, mean, cold, sexually unfaithful.
We are then treated (inbetween bouts of sentimental stories) antic twists and turns to as each of the characters who care so much for Ross and are so worried about him and put-off by his behavior themselves go through a trajectory of super-anguish, super-heroism, anger, and so on to match his, all presenting their inner souls in melodramatic (over-done) gestures. Time is taken out for Cecily and Geoffrey Charles to attempt two elopements, an absurd attempt of George to marry Cecily to spite his step-son (deterred by the step-son suggesting Cecily could be pregnant so George would have another illegitimate child), Ross and Demelza to hide the lovers who are nonetheless snatched away, he beaten within an inch of his life, she deciding she would rather not marry anyway, but for a moment feeling for him.
The reviews made fun of much of this, either implying or saying outright all was preposterous, outrageous improbability. Why should (for example) Meceron (Tim Dutton) and Hanson (Peter Sullivan) come to Cornwall to confide in George Warleggan (Jack Farthing) and his uncle (Pip Torrens) as their own means of revenging themselves on Ross. What should they revenge themselves on him for anyway? George Warleggan as a character is turned into convenient never-ending engine of spite against Ross until the last moment. (In the later books he dislikes Ross intensely but he has other interests.)
Geoffrey Charles and Cecily parting — they are the romance couple of the season
Everything culminates in Ross’s plan to have his friends (Drake, Sam, Zacky Martin [Tristan Sturrock]) set off fireworks to warn people (who we are told) of the invasion just as it starts (which it never seems to). He has told Dwight the truth since Dwight (whose character is utterly travestied) threatens to end the friendship unless Ross explains himself and Dwight is involved somehow or other. Since all our male friends are enlisted for this spectacle we have Morwenna and Rosina and Caroline (reminding me of Kitty in the 1950s Gunsmoke while Matt is out endangering his life) at home worrying. One of them even says “Be careful” in that usual way. At the last minute finally Demelza is told (off-stage so we have to guess) that Ross has all along been behaving as a mole-spy, having an affair with Tess as part of this cover-up.
So what does she do but rush back to Nampara to throw herself into the very danger from the French working there, which danger Ross purported to be protecting her from. A wholly improbable duel emerges because she then pretends to want to have sexual intercourse with the French leader in front of Ross to humiliate him. How far can we go? But along comes an unexpected deus ex machina: George, who turns up with a conscience and a gun to stop the dueling; he cannot bear to betray his country. (Everyone who is a major character must have some good qualities.) And (like the child in The Emperor’s New Clothes) wakes everyone up to what is supposed reality.
Ross with sword — no cuckold he —
The program is now ready to swing back — in effect to erase all that has happened for 8 episodes. Geoffrey Charles (his name is never shortened), while bitterly disappointed, turns from grief to studying and training to be a soldier; he can certainly ardently love someone else – as he does in The Stranger from the Sea. Morwenna and Drake now have that baby, Loveday (with the strange name explained) we learn is growing up when we finally hear of her in Stranger from the Sea; Tess exposed, there is nothing left for Rosina and Sam but to marry as they are when the new book opens.
A self-reflexive touch was to bring Robin Ellis back as the Judge Halse who will put Merceron and Hanson away for a long time so we get Aidan Turner and Ellis shaking hands just about near the end. Poldark lives on you see – then we learn Demelza, now completely reconciled to Ross’s lying (and behavior) is pregnant again (accounting for Isabelle-Rose whom we will meet in Stranger from the Sea).
Some of these scenes could have been moving, and for fleeting moments are (Harry Richardson manages it) were it not that they are given such brief mostly unprepared for scenes and embedded in spy-thriller nonsense. I found Ross and Demelza’s last scene ludicrously overdone because of the reiterated “I will return.” If you turn off the sound, the actors are effective. By the time of Stranger in the Sea Ross has been away for months, in London and in Portugal and Spain, working for reform, and now a quiet agent-spy for George Canning. He returns to Demelza, presented as preferring Cornwall, one-third of the way into the book.
Far shot of George taking leave of Trenwith and the staff with dignity
Close up of him looking round once more at this place he had so coveted
One exception is the curiously moving silent pantomime moment given slow ritual play seen at a distance when George leaves Trenwith – which has been left abandoned when Stranger in the Sea starts again. The actor did pull it off, for a moment the last hour of this fifth season was lifted from its concluding morass of absurdities.
Ross takes out time to shame Tess (who Demelza says she feels sorry for but is smugly looking on) — the ejected bad woman
In the last two episodes especially of the fifth season we have the embarrassing spectacle of a intelligent and thoughtful woman script-writer and “creator” (the writer is the linchpin person of these costume dramas on British TV) leading a team of capable people to make a travesty out of fine somewhat seriously intended historical fiction. I presume it’s the drive for high ratings and in a gut level way her own lack of sympathy for costume drama and liberal-left politics. It saddens and dismays me to see this. She does update: Ross is “disappeared” by Hanson and Merceron at the opening of the 8th episode (like any rebel in contemporary fascist dictatorships)
Despard on the scaffold just before he begins to speak
Catherine watching from below
What is valuable in this fifth season (though represented through the lens of hostile conservative historians) is the presentation of the Despard story. I assume many more people will now have heard of this man than have done for many a decade. At the close of the fifth and sixth episodes time and dignity are afford the trial, testimonies and killing of Despard. He is allowed to give part of his speech at the time. Debbie Horsfield has read her history and the names of the men murdered alongside Despard are there and accurate.
Catherine Despard (Kerri McLean) was a pro-active intelligent woman who did all she could to publish what was cruelly inflicted on her husband and others in the prisons and to obtain a pardon for him after the guilty verdict. I was glad to see though Horsfield seemed to feel she needed to knit Catherine into the love stories so she has Dwight falling in love with Kitty (again a repeat — he fell in love with Keren Daniels, also another man’s wife Caroline reminds him) there was no sign of this woman having a romance with Dwight. Indeed in the story he is made to testify that Despard was mad and not responsible for his actions, the slur the newspapers placed on Despard’s actions, which survived into the 19th century histories of the incident.
Costumes, setting, music: Looking back over the five years I’d say one of the strongest elements has been a combining use of music and landscape to mesmerize the viewer, to create a continual mood which draws upon the place (Cornish landscape, seascape, minescape) and the projection of passion in the actors. When a sequence or scene is given some time, it’s been especially effective, but even when the scenes are swiftly and endlessly switched back and forth, the music offers a continuity that binds the experience together. The costumes blended in, did not call attention to themselves except when the character was in an occasion.
This last season a decision was made to dress Eleanor Tomlinson in an emerald green pelisse and matching squarish hat; the effect was to emphasize her height, and make her look mannish; since several times she is put on horseback, riding to some rescue, I suppose this was an attempt to make her into a female hero but found it grating, alienating. I have read comments by her which suggest how much she loves the Demelza of Graham’s books. Before this role I loved the way she embodied characters; here she has been made to alternate between a calculating hardened shrew and a woman whose understanding of love is a demand her lover prove it.
A rare unforced thoughtful moment for Tomlinson as Demelza
All along I have suggested that making Aidan Turner into a central over-sexualized fetish undermined the sometimes effective ensemble nature of the story, and what I suggest what Graham’s general aim: to provide a picture of an earlier time and place with his hero as an effective if self-contained and private presence within a group.
I was interested to notice that the ending of the second season of the first Poldark season (1975, Warleggan) where we see Ross (Ellis) and Demelza (Angharad Rees) walking on the beach as he prepares to return to the army and she to wait for him in Cornwall was in effect revived. Also an utter departure from Graham’s book
If the series does return, my hope would be that Debbie Horsfield returns to her literal closeness to the books in the first and third seasons. I think the problem for me all along has been Debbie Horsfield’s lack of sympathy with some of Graham’s central conceptions so that her stories while variations on Graham’s stories Horsfield, lack or are the reverse of his outlook. This year she dropped Graham just about altogether except his method (the choice of a minor historical figure, costume drama itself). At core what I have liked all these years is the transfer of the matter of Graham’s Poldark into these videos, realized through effective acting, dramaturgy, the whole experience of film. The anticipatory hints suggest more frustration. In lieu of Portugal and Spain as the secondary setting, and the colonialist war of the era (called the Peninsular war) at the opening of The Stranger from the Sea we might find ourselves in Paris, France, near Napoleon (better known), with Ross as Canning’s spy and Dwight as Ross’s sidekick, spending time investigating psychological “medicine” in a nearby sanitarium.
Demelza, Caroline, Dwight
Hail and farewell.
The two Rosses
Ellen
I was on one of the Poldark pages (where I was continually harassed by someone who disagreed with my postings) accused of being absurdly wrong when I suggested the way Tess functioned across the 5th season resembled the way a femme fatale functions in spy-thrillers.
Yes Tess’s outfits were not glamorous, and she was thug-like (recalling Horsfield’s Keren) instead of subtle, but the central function was the same: she almost substituted for George as our evil center of the action continually, deceitful, smoldering, seeking to use sex as her weapon. The literal details are quite different for most of the femme fatales, but you can find this kind of resentment/spite and determination to take revenge in some of them: for example, the chief femme fatale in Maltese Falcon; also a couple of the femme fatale types in Winston Graham: the heroine-villain of Angel, Pearl and Little God (her name is Pearl).
My idea is Tess’s function in the whole drama is analogous to the function of the femme fatale in film noir: ever deceitful, ever destructive, ever angry and especially sexy and ever resentful/envious. When you make a comparison, it need not be literally the same in all points; the use of color and light in film noir is not found in most of the Poldarks but I was interested to find that thriller-spy type motifs are found in Poldark 5:7-5:8 and correspondingly the two episodes were filmed often in more darkness.
You can shed light on different types across genres and in WG’s case he wrote in these two genres. In his later Poldarks he transfers types and typical events from the suspense novels to the Poldark (Stephen Carrington the robbery), and Horsfield in Tess and the fifth season last two episodes is doing likewise only the thriller-suspense mystery stuff (what could Ross be doing? why is he with this Frenchman and all the violence) is coming from 21st century video thriller-suspense-mystery series.
Often femme fatales are snide, nasty; speaking for myself I find them anything but alluring. Both Debbie Horsfield’s Keren Daniels and Tess are thoroughly repugnant. Watch The Maltese Falcon, the central woman played Mary Astor who is also shamed and ostracized at the end of the story.
I don’t want to read your blog since I still haven’t seen the last episode, but they’ve been billing Poldark as the final season.
I have to admit I personally haven’t been too enmeshed in the show this season. I feel like the Despard plot took up too much of the season considering these are minor characters not introduced until this season and that kind of ruined my interest in the show and the other characters. I still liked it, but it felt like the series has burnt out and that they didn’t know what more to do with the main characters.
Tyler
I hope you do read the blogs when you are done — I’ve divided the series into two blogs — the first concentrated on this new matter; let’s call Despard and Colonialist:
https://ellenandjim.wordpress.com/2019/10/20/poldark-the-fifth-season-episodes-1-4/
I regret to say 1) the best things or elements in this fifth season are this story — the bringing forward into modern memory this important “minor” figure, his wife, this educated Creole woman; Merceron, the Godfather type; Pitt’s spy system run by William Wickham; so what you will find, Tyler, is my correction of Horsfield’s reactionary interpretation. What gets me is she goes out of her way to research and present this matter but then presents it in a reactionary way — with Ross a rare person sympathizing with Despard when in fact he was murdered because he was a “site” for thousands to rally around, and as much the Irish (he was Anglo-Irish) as any other rebellious group.
I have come cross on the Poldark pages also that many people regard this matter as intrusive; I think they don’t understand it very well or they are there for the romance stories.
2) My second blog – this one — has hardly anything on the Despard matter — I just say the imprisonment, trial and immediate aftermath is treated with dignity (if falsely — Dwight is made to say authoritatively that Despard was mad) — but then I have to say how dismaying and disappointing I found the treatment of this inbetween time. I go over how Horsfield treats the four sets of lovers: Ross/Demelza, Dwight/Caroline, Drake/Morwenna, Sam/Rosina.
Yes at the time there are thudding hints there may be more seasons, but there has been not one word anywhere to suggest this is a reality.
The New Statesman pointed out (yes a venerable publication) that the ratings were high and were apparently puzzled at the ending. Myself I think the left point of view insofar as it was there was not liked. When you get to it, you will see that to follow Stranger from the Sea would have meant trying to present the Peninsular war – who knows about that any more?
I am back on my book project on Graham: it takes time and I have little time during term time to work. I do love historical fiction.
Ellen
Julia LeGath: “I agree with your blog! It’s ridiculous that Ross STILL thinks he can’t trust Demelza and would tell Dwight and not Demelza. Plus, why would Horsfield’s ‘modernized’ Demelza waited months before walking out when she realized Ross was keeping secrets again!
I thought the whole ‘I will return’ ending was so hokey complete with coat flourish over Turner’s ass!”
Susan Denton Armstrong: “I read your blog a couple days ago and couldn’t agree more. The whole Tess/Ross affair is beyond ridiculous.
Bonny Wise: “The “affair” is just a cover story for what Ross is really up to but it’s over the top ridiculous”
I feel that the presentation of Ross’s relationship with Tess is ambiguous and could be taken to imply he had an affair with her. I don’t feel sorry for her (as Debbie Horsfield’s Demelza says) but I do find it base in him to use her that way, in reality one human being using another sexually would triumph over her, and even more outrageous the idea he would scold and ostracize her publicly afterwards. If anyone were to take this seriously, the inference would destroy any respect we’d have for Ross. But because the two episodes (7 &8) are emphatically spy-thriller stuff, the program gets away with his trashing of a character, Ross’s.
I don’t think I have been that concerned about Ross’ character being “trashed” since the saga’s fourth novel. However, I’m glad that this is over. In a way, I’m glad that Horsfield will not adapt the last five novels. I don’t think she is a good television storyteller. She has adapted another person’s literary work and made a hash out of it. At least to me. What a disappointment this has been.
I think Debbie Horsfield is at her best in these five years when she stays close to the novel — allowing for her changes to Demelza and Elizabeth’s characters; Francis’s too. One problem is how a story ends often frames our memory of it, and this fifth season as framer of Debbie Horsfield’s adaptation makes us forget the good things she’s done — including at least getting some people to read or re-read the books.
Well . . . I have to admit that Season One was pretty good. Perhaps it was easier for Horsfield to adapt Winston Graham’s first two novels.
If I am remembering correctly, I feel the first season, much of the second into the time of the trial of Ross (say half-way through Jeremy Poldark) has some wonderful filmic visualizations, acting, music; again Warleggan up to Francis’s death, and what I consider a rape scene truly dramatized. The falling away or too many departures begin around there; much of Black Moon is well dramatized and then the last two books (Four Swans and Angry Tide), the melodrama ratcheted up.
This is very subjective 🙂
From a face-book conversation: I wrote” I feel that the presentation of Ross’s relationship with Tess is ambiguous and could be taken to imply he had an affair with her. I don’t feel sorry for her (as Debbie Horsfield’s Demelza says) but I do find it base in him to use her that way, in reality one human being using another sexually would triumph over her, and even more outrageous the idea he would scold and ostracize her publicly afterwards. If anyone were to take this seriously, the inference would destroy any respect we’d have for Ross. But because the two episodes (7 &8) are emphatically spy-thriller stuff, the program gets away with his trashing of a character, Ross’s.
Sandra Denton Armstrong: “how outrageous was Tess knowing Demelza had seduced Ross and publicly outing her? Then Demelza confirms it. Ross’s earlier dislike of Tess makes the scenario unbelievable. Your observation makes it disgusting.
Lisa Marie Kainz Harris “Although I too think the whole Tess/Ross thing was silly, I can somewhat understand what he thought he was doing. He needed Tess to believe he was ‘smitten’ lets say, so that Demelza would believe it, so that the French would believe it. And that included Dwight. And Demelza leaving to live at Killawaran plays into that scheme. At least he does miss her. Of course we know that Demelza could have been ‘in on it’ and would have helped, but for some reason DH always makes it ALL about Ross. Ross thinks he is the only one who can do “it.” Whatever “it” is. Had Tess been paying better attention and not so willing to believe Ross, she wouldn’t have fallen for the ruse. I wish he had been even harsher towards her in the end. My biggest disappointment is the last two episodes were so good, but so packed full of action. I wish they had done away with the first 3 episode, and spread out the action of the last two. Ned should have died in episode 3. My opinion.
Sandra Denton Armstrong: “I understand how you see it and don’t disagree. I just think the whole spy thriller wannabe is so unPoldark.”
Mervi Moy “I completely agree with this comment of yours. s5 is such a disservice to WG’s story and characters.
Me: So I take it some agree with me that Ross had an affair with Tess (went to bed with her) during the time he was acting as a mole to ferret out secrets about a proposed invasion of the French, and some don’t. I still think DH left it somewhat ambiguous. For myself I disagree with the interpretation being given Demelza and Ross’s first time in bed together: in the 4th episode of this new series, in the 3rd of the 1974, and in the book, the incident is complicated and by no means can it be said Demelza entrapped her employer: she was frightened her father would insist she go home with him; she wanted to be alluring, and she hoped that Ross would not let her go; if you look at Graham you will see she did not formulate any manipulative plan, and it was only at their second encounter that night that they began to have sex. I realize that in this 5th season, DH has Demelza herself offer this view of herself. I see it as reductive anti-feminist and a travesty of what happened. DH has her say this to Catherine Despard and offer the idea that Catherine Despard was also a kitchen maid. That is nonsense: in 3 different histories documentation is produced to show that Catherine Despard was the daughter of a free woman of color; her mother owned enslaved people (African people owned other people like European whites did); it is unlikely her daughter was anyone’s kitchen maid. Catherine was well-educated and had good middle class manners — why she could write good letters and make political appeals. The whole conversation is then false: to history and to the character herself in the first novel. It makes of Demelza a plotting phony, which she was not. Her feeling sorry for Tess is all the more ridiculous as there is no parallel between her and Tess who is throughout an envious angry thug. But Ross’s final shaming of Tess seems to me in bad taste if he did go to bed with her.
We can remember this: Winston Graham wrote more than 30 mystery-suspense novels; most of them are not spy-thrillers but they partake with some of the atmosphere and devices. That is not why DH wrote what she did; she wrote what she did to get high ratings.
Now that I watched the final episode I can comment. I also thought the Ross/Tess affair a bit of a stretch, but I don’t think it’s a real affair – not one where sex actually happened. I think Tess is so unstable she succumbed to Ross leading her on, in hopes of revenge on Demelza more than anything. I did like how the last episode ended with George coming in and helping to save the day and an overall sense that deep down Ross and George don’t completely hate each other. Their lives are so intertwined that I think they would feel a significant loss if they didn’t have each other to hate. I think on some level they enjoy their battles and that is a sort of distorted affection they feel – after all, they both loved the same woman so how can you completely hate someone who also loves the one you love, even if they are the reason you cannot be with that one. I thought it a clever conclusion. They have advertised this as the final season but if they decided to do another, I would watch it.
I would watch it too. I am now re-watching the third season; it and the first and second come closest to the books and are strong. I found the sudden companionability of Ross and George unbelievable unless we are to switch registers and regard the scenes as self-reflexive, fiction commenting on itself by the characters coming of their roles to be the actors. The sexual life of Ross is left ambiguous: Demelza’s final response is less absurd is she believes that Ross was sexually involved with Tess, but his final shaming of her (as I say) then in bad taste. I put this on the Passion for Poldark and Cornwall page today:
Last night after weeping (yes I cried, and by the way so did Elizabeth at Aberfan — that she couldn’t and didn’t cry is completely false) over the moving death of John Hollingworth (as Henshawe) in the fifth episode of the third season, I was rejuvenated to see him brought back in the third season of The Crown as Porchey (Lord Porchester) next to the queen, both of them so enjoying one another’s company and a life at the races, at stables, that she (Olivia Coleman) is led to lament her unlived life … Such such are the pleasures of costume drama watching … The third season of Poldark is very strong partly because of how closely they stayed to Black Moon, and where they depart as in the build-up of Henshawe’s character, his accidental death, and Ross’s remorse (another lesson learned by our hero not in the books) I was moved — the funeral and singing by the sea touching. Much filmed by the sea in these episodes …. I am a great lover of Graham’s character of Dwight Enys and think Luke Norris manages to do justice to the part when the sentimentality of the approach to his love life is off stage.
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